That short video is rather good!
Your voice-over is great
, by the way - very clear - but the voice volume seemed a tad too loud/crisp (I was wearing headphones and had to reduce the volume when your voice kicked in). What is the accent? It sounded very familiar, but I couldn't place it - I thought it had Yorks/Lancs overtones, but was unsure whether it was Brum, or some other North/Midlands accent. It sounded a bit like a friend of mine who hailed from Manchester.