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851
^ Well, I started this novel on June 6th, 23 days ago. And I'm 60% done. At that rate, I could be 100% done in another 2.5 weeks. I can easily imagine churning out at least two, if not more books annually.
852
Edits implemented and uploaded as thru18_ch17modded.zip
853
@4wd: due to what you turned up Sherlocking, I've made minor modifications in three parts of Ch. 17 to reflect corrected time-frames. New upload is thru_18_revised.zip.

Online HTML version has also been updated.
854
I'm about 60% done with this novel which, of course, will end on a cliffhanger...
855
New zip file in original post, containing mobi and epub formats for the manuscript up through end of Ch. 18. Online html version has been updated too.
856
Fix:

“Computer, run extensive search for Sethra Slatten in both the archived video logs, and in the clandestine audio logs.”
“Please specify a time span.”
“May eleventh through June eleventh of this year.”



Fix:

...Symptoms are vomiting, shallow breathing, profuse sweating, weakness. I’ve logged that she’ll be off-duty the remainder of the day.”
857
Busy day, but got 1300 words into Chapter 18.
858
Uploaded Ch17_minorUpdate.zip to OP.
859
Making a few very minor edits to Ch 17. Word transpositions, etc., for greater clarity. No significant content change.
860
BTW, you still have Glen Forkovian as the creator in content.opf:

Fixed it. You'll see the change in my next upload.
861
The manuscript now includes Chapter 17. The e-reader formats, epub and mobi, are downloadable from the original post in this thread as a zip archive. The manuscript is also available in HTML format from a link in the original post.
862
I have begun working on Chapter 17...
863
^ LOL. He said "anus".
864
Fantastic, Perry and 4wd. Invaluable! I've made the changes, and will upload as 4wd_Perry_Jun27.zip
865
Difficult when it updates and you're in the middle of reading. If we were working on a GoogleDoc (or other auto-update) it wouldn't matter

For my next book, perhaps we could find a free Tortoise SVN repository hosting site that allows multiple download-only users.
866
Matteo would have had a big question over all the chiming about official / work issues during his interaction with the security chief?

He probably wondered. However, Covington's first words after switching to private chime was something along the lines of "How you holding up, buckeroo?" A friendly, private inquiry, perhaps a private indication that Matteo is a favorite of his. That would have to some extent allayed Matteo's suspicion.
867
Thanks! Made many corrections.

My current manuscript has the following. You do have the most recent one?

The software not only creates a continuous reality for users to experience, but also facilitates the actual transfer of consciousness into the simulation.



Paragraph 11.43 "“Did you guys get some details worked out?” she asked sleepily. “Yes,” Byron replied. “We’ll make our move soon. Be ready for Sethra’s chime.”  I didn't know if they would have been more careful about bugs? Especially after his questioning of Sethra in 9.13 'He hesitated, glanced around the small living space. “Are you sure your cubicle is secure?”'

They should have been more careful. Byron's more seat of the pants than Sethra, and figured the question was general enough not to implicate them.



What's the difference between the communications console and chiming? Or maybe none? It seemed that the communications console was recorded / official but the internal chiming was less so??

Exactly so. Chimes are encrypted, non-recordable messages that are sent wirelessly among people's implants by a conscious act of will. An implant can record real-time audio/video, as Sethra did in Chapter 1's meeting, when Dr. Hasser gave his little speech. But their chiming function (more sophisticated form of today's Skyping, perhaps) is designed so that it cannot be used in an incriminating fashion or for entrapment. Part of the Personal Electronic Liberties & Freedoms Act of 2107.
868
When Sandi saw me re-reading from the beginning, she mistook it for new chapters and her eyes lit up and started putting off going to bed (until I had to disappoint her).

Aaahhh... That's delightful. Well, feed her Ch. 16. That will curb the worst of the withdrawal symptoms. I'll try to put up Ch 17. tonight or early tomorrow.
869
Going to mow yard, and then eat lunch with my father. Will be starting on Chapter 17 this afternoon, and waiting for your reactions to Chapter 16.
870
Chapter 16 written. Manuscript re-uploaded to OP.
871
Thanks, Perry. Implemented, and will be reflected when I upload a zip containing Chapter 16.
872
Thanks, 4wd and Perry. Your corrections have been implemented, and uploaded as "4wd_Perry_26June.zip" in the OP. I've also updated the online HTML version.
873
Time to hit the hay. Got about 1400 words into Chapter 16. I imagine that Chapter 16 will be available sometime tomorrow for download or online viewing.
874
what do you think about something like:

'And if our experiment fails, we won’t know it: once the process of immersion starts, either Sethra’s theory proves out, or else we just lose consciousness and never know it when we die.'

Done.
875
Will appear as "once we undergo immersion" when I upload next .zip containing Ch. 16.
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