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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on August 01, 2013, 06:28 PM »
I'll post it in its entirety since it also brags on Perry and 4wd's proofing job (emphasis added):

Kyrathaba Rising is a new take on alien/post apocalyptical fiction. The earth has been devastated by an alien attack, leaving perhaps 60,000 humans left to carry on the species. This is pretty standard fare in the genre, but what makes this different is that the aliens are not actively in attack mode; the mothership has moved on. But they have left a caretaker force, so humans cannot merely go about their efforts to repopulate the planet. When you throw in a gaming aspect, the book stands alone in the plot and storyline. It is unique and rather compelling.

The story revolves around a group of less than a thousand people living in an underground complex simply labeled A3. As increased radiation starts taking its toll on the people, four people try a new approach, beyond the physical realm as we know it in order to keep the substance of humanity alive.

Overall, the book is well-written. The character voices are appropriate and believable. One particular shift in the voice was quite well done--we didn't need to have it explained when one character had a significant life-altering experience. We could read it in his voice. The action scenes were well-developed and painted a good picture of what was happening.

Editing was good. There were no big problems in either copy editing or proofreading that interrupted the flow of the story. The reader is pulled along for the ride.

The ending left me hanging a bit. I would have liked to see a more conclusive reason for the end of the book, but it certainly left me wanting to buy the next volume. I have a vested interest now in the story, and I want to see what happens next.

Kyrathaba Rising is a taut, well-written novel. What I liked most of all, though, is that it is unique. The author has explored new ground, taking at least three genres and intertwining them together into an exciting new tale of danger, hope, and resilience. I look forward to the sequel.

Disclosure: I received a free copy of this book to review.
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on August 01, 2013, 06:21 PM »
Got a wonderful review on Amazon today (4 of 5 stars were given). Here's an excerpt:

Kyrathaba Rising is a taut, well-written novel. What I liked most of all, though, is that it is unique. The author has explored new ground, taking at least three genres and intertwining them together into an exciting new tale of danger, hope, and resilience. I look forward to the sequel.

See the full review here.
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on August 01, 2013, 08:30 AM »
^ to be honest, I'm about 2/3 of the way through the mandatory Book 1 Recap (for those weird individuals who aren't sticklers about starting a series from the very beginning book). Next, I'll do an extensive outline, chapter by chapter, for the entirety of book 2. I'm going to write this book in WriteMonkey using Extra Markdown to produce HTML versions of each chapter. These will be formatted with bold and italics where I want it, and will be easy to proofread. Only near the end of revisioning will I import the HTML chapters into Jutoh to compile epub and mobi ebooks.
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on August 01, 2013, 07:05 AM »
If I get to return to work, like I'm hoping, I may have to push that back till Thanksgiving.
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 31, 2013, 08:44 PM »
How about this:

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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 31, 2013, 08:10 PM »
I confess I'm not yet conversant with Wordpress features and nuances. What do you recommend, rgdot?
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 31, 2013, 07:33 PM »
^ Good deal!
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 31, 2013, 07:28 PM »
Check the page now, 4wd. Adjusted offsets and narrowed form's width...
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 31, 2013, 07:10 PM »
I'm in negotiations with a professional voice-over actor/producer about having him make an audio-book version of Kyrathaba Rising for a split of royalties.
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 31, 2013, 06:19 PM »
We'll see. Nothing that can't be dealt with if that occurs. I'm backing up the blog to a "Online Backup for Wordpress" via plug-in, and downloading files weekly via FTP.
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 31, 2013, 05:42 PM »
It's early-on in this authorship adventure. Only ten days since Kyrathaba Rising went live on Smashwords (it went live at later dates on several other sites). As is typical of new authors (and some not so new), I really need reviews. If any of you have read my book, please consider writing a review on one or more of the following three sites: Goodreads (1st preference), Amazon, and Shvoong. The Shvoong review can be up to but not exceeding 900 words. I expect a review to be coming in by the end of the week from published ebook author Shane Etter, so that'll help.

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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 31, 2013, 04:52 PM »
So, Akismet is probably hiding the spam from me, and some of these are probably bots... Mmm... sounds about right.
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 31, 2013, 03:15 PM »
I mean, that's fine -- great, even, I suppose. Bloggers need subscribers, right? I'm just surprised at how quickly -- that's averaging 9 new members per day. I emailed Perry to see if he could help me on another issue. I have a few people wanting signed printed copies of my book. I spent two frustrating hours on CreateSpace the other night. Everything was fine but I could not get the cover image for the jacket to suit them.
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 31, 2013, 02:37 PM »
Again, stunned at the frequency of ppl joining the blog; up for 72 hours and 27 members already? Where are these ppl coming from? Most of them have outlook.com email addresses...
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 31, 2013, 02:23 PM »
How's it look now, 4wd? The contact slide-out form is at the very top-right, where it won't block written content.
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 30, 2013, 10:02 PM »
Good idea.
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 30, 2013, 09:29 PM »
Ok. Tomorrow I'll replace it with a simple hyperlink
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 30, 2013, 08:58 PM »
See if it's more to your liking now, 4wd. I made it floating, and 110 pixels narrower.
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 30, 2013, 05:55 PM »
Can't believe this: blog's up 3 days and I've got 20 members already?
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Living Room / Re: Infographic of Internet Usage Every 60 Seconds
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 30, 2013, 12:11 PM »
Not only interesting numbers, but visually appealing (to me, at least).
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Living Room / Infographic of Internet Usage Every 60 Seconds
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 30, 2013, 07:37 AM »
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 29, 2013, 07:49 PM »
^ Good observation, rgdot. Did so.
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 29, 2013, 06:57 PM »
You're probably right. Guess I jumped the gun. Its just: the Wordpress looks so much better, I felt embarrassed by the Blogger look/feel.
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 29, 2013, 06:49 PM »
I only had two members, and they were wife and father, who never looked at the blog :(  Shouldn't inconvenience anyone.

Re: >> Nice work with the site, @wraith: thanks!
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Living Room / Re: Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
« Last post by kyrathaba on July 29, 2013, 06:23 PM »
Kyrathaba Rising has made its way to the Kobo bookstore.
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