From what I could see, ch 5 looked pretty good. Aside from the spotting/fixing of typos and obvious grammatical mistakes, I'd like to lock these in and not spend a lot of time on less-structural, more aesthetic (and thus, subjective) things. Because I'd like to have the ebook in mouser's hands by Aug 1st and upload to Smashwords by mid to late August.
That should ease your and 4wd's task.
For those unaware, Perry also spent considerable time and effort creating a gorgeous book cover. Can't wait to hear mouser's comment when he sees it