Thank you Perry and 4wd. All your corrections/suggestions have been implemented, and can now be downloaded from the

OP, or

read on the web. Chapter 12 has been added.

Updated word count:

Work on this project began on Thursday, June 6, 2013.

Prologue: 1,932 words {Cumulative: 1,932} uploaded 6/13

Chapter 1: 3,423 words {Cumulative: 5,355} wrote 6/10; revised 6/11

Chapter 2: 3,540 words {Cumulative: 8,895} wrote 6/10; revised 6/11

Chapter 3: 3,485 words {Cumulative: 12,380} wrote 6/11; revised 6/12

Chapter 4: 3,384 words {Cumulative: 15,764} finished initial draft 6/12; copy-edited on 6/13; more corrections 6/14

Chapter 5: 2,787 words {Cumulative: 18,551} wrote 6/13, uploaded 6/13

Chapter 6: 1,281 words {Cumulative: 19,832} wrote 6/13, uploaded 6/14

Chapter 7: 1,993 words {Cumulative: 21,825} wrote 6/14 and 6/15

Chapter 8: 2,130 words {Cumulative: 23,955} wrote 6/15; corrections to Ch 7 & 8 and uploaded 6/16

Chapter 9: 2,222 words {Cumulative: 26,177} uploaded 6/16; revised due to reported grammatical errors, and reuploaded 6/16

Chapter 10: 2,777 words {Cumulative: 28,954} uploaded 6/17; some errors corrected in revised Ch. 11 upload on 6/19

Chapter 11: 3,056 words {Cumulative: 32,010} uploaded 6/18; revised 6/19

Chapter 12: 2,108 words {Cumulative: 34,118} uploaded 6/20