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kyrathaba:
>>He grunted in remembrance. and sat back down.

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He grunted in remembrance, and sat back down.

kyrathaba:
Beta-readers, I have read Prologue through end of Chapter 2 and found a few very minor issues. As you read, please make note of any issues you discover or aren't sure about, and we'll compare them once we get my updated Epub converted to RTF and uploaded to the Google Docs working document.

kyrathaba:
Yikes, near beginning of Ch. 3, found "skull" misspelled "skll". Fixed.

kyrathaba:
I've completed my cull through Prologue, Ch. 1, Ch. 2, Ch. 3, and Ch. 4. Beginning Chapter 5.

kyrathaba:
Chapter 5 done. Whew, that was a long one!

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