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Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
Perry Mowbray:
I found the couple or so days of not having updates let me put it aside and then start looking at it afresh....onto chapter 3 later :)
I'm going to end up knowing this book better than my all time favourite: The Stainless Steel Ratw
-4wd (June 25, 2013, 07:27 AM)
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Agree... it's amazing how you get caught up in the flow and get carried over, sometimes missing things. I even get amazed at the different things I picked up going back and reading it aloud to Sandi.
kyrathaba:
I even get amazed at the different things I picked up going back and reading it aloud to Sandi.
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Yeah, that's trick I've read about several places: reading aloud. When we read silently our mind tends to fill in missing words, but not so much when we read aloud.
4wd:
The 'go under' feels redundant coupled with immersion but it's a 50/50 thing, maybe:
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Corrected to:
once we go undergo immersion,
-kyrathaba (June 25, 2013, 07:18 AM)
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I think it should be: once we undergo immersion,
I even get amazed at the different things I picked up going back and reading it aloud to Sandi.
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Yeah, that's trick I've read about several places: reading aloud. When we read silently our mind tends to fill in missing words, but not so much when we read aloud.-kyrathaba (June 25, 2013, 08:07 PM)
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It's the difference between flying over the potholes compared to hitting every single one :P
kyrathaba:
^ My correction had an error in it :)
kyrathaba:
Will appear as "once we undergo immersion" when I upload next .zip containing Ch. 16.
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