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Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
kyrathaba:
Chapter 10 has been written. See original post for zip archive containing the EPUB and MOBI ebook files.
kyrathaba:
Added closing quotation mark to phrase: Dr. Jaimie Ericson, Chief of Earth Sciences, and head of this ongoing development.
kyrathaba:
There was one too many commas in the following sentence, but it has been modified below so that I think it flows correctly:
There are things going on that may ultimately benefit us, perhaps even gain us victory over the aliens.
Also corrected a confusing bit by replacing it with that shown below:
The group sat in a tavern within the town that styled itself “The Prancing Unicorn”. Byron, a fan of Tolkienn, had just about doubled-over when he’d seen the painted sign outside the establishment. Now, they sat sipping smooth, cold, refreshing ale. Byron said, “Come on, Sethra, admit it. ‘The Prancing Unicorn’? It has to be an in-joke among your programming team, a nod to The Hobbit’s ‘Prancing Pony’ in Bree."
“My lips are sealed” said Sethra, and grinned.
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kyrathaba:
“Thanks,” said Sethra. “That will be all for now”.
becomes
“Thanks,” said Sethra. “That will be all for now.”
40hz:
“Thanks,” said Sethra. “That will be all for now”.
becomes
“Thanks,” said Sethra. “That will be all for now.”
-kyrathaba (June 17, 2013, 04:16 PM)
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Maybe just bold the word now but not the following period?
as in: "That will be all for now." instead of "That will be all for now."
:)
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