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timns:
And thanks folks. I was striving for that sort of "Reader's Digest / Dail Mail Strike Fear into the Hearts of the Middle Classes" sort of tone.

KynloStephen66515:
Its a great story but being a bug tester, i find it hard not to see no less than 10 major errors, 15 minor ones, and 5 or so grammatical mistakes. Sorry to seem so picky lol. I did enjoy it though! :)

tomos:
[...] no less than 10 major errors, 15 minor ones [...]
-Stephen66515 (March 05, 2011, 11:05 PM)
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I think they wuz intentional

and 5 or so grammatical mistakes.
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not so sure about them ;-)

cranioscopical:
less than 10 major errors
-Stephen66515 (March 05, 2011, 11:05 PM)
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Too few to count…

timns:
The major errors were of course intentional.  :P

As for the grammatical or 'picky' errers - probably just typos although I have been known to make silly mistakes. Usually my grammer and spellling is being beyond reproach  8)

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