Hi to all,
I am currently a finalist in a e-learning type Video Demo Contest and
urgently require feedback.
My entry can be viewed at:
http://demo.sitesell.../sbivfinal/index.htmThe contest is to translate a product instruction guide into video.
It will supplement or may even replace an online text Guide and key Help & Strategies
pages.
The guidance, or rules for the competition I was given where as follows:
"Communicate! The video should clearly and cleanly explain the WHAT
and the HOW-TO of the text on DAY 2 (Chapter 2) of the guide."
I urgently require feedback on my entry as a finalist.
I will be able to submit changes by the 29 Sept 05 - before the final judgment.
If I win...I get the job to translate a whole range of instructional texts to
video.
Please also take the time to view the other three finalist videos...
I really need comment on which one out of the four you would vote for as being the best,
from a user's point of view and why...I need this view from people who do not already know
the product.
All the finalist videos can be found at:
Leon (Thats me):
http://demo.sitesell.../sbivfinal/index.htmKelly:
http://demo.sitesell...y/01_Day2_Intro.htmlMarcus:
http://demo.sitesell...om/marcus/day-2.htmlPete & Dee:
http://demo.sitesell...ion-guide-daytwo.htmObviously I would like you to vote for mine...but please state objectively
which one you think is the best at communicating to its audience and why.
I will be directing the judges to this forum to view the comments.
Your feedback will be much appreciated...
Cheers Leon.