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Sci-fi novel now available from DC member kyrathaba!
kyrathaba:
I've reworked the first half of Ch. 13, and feel it is much better now. Chapter 14 has been added. Suggest that those following this novel's development re-read Ch 13 and then read Ch 14. See the OP for mobi and epub download, or read it online here.
kyrathaba:
I'm about 49% of the way to my goal of an eighty-thousand word novel. :)
kyrathaba:
Chapter 14 correction to be uploaded when Ch. 15 is completed:
This pool began nineteen meters away from the one he’d dived yesterday, which had proven to be go no deeper than four meters and to be completely uninteresting.
Removed the word "go".
kyrathaba:
I've uploaded a new zip file in the OP, and new files to the online HTML version. Both contains tweaks to Ch. 14 that I think make it better.
kyrathaba:
Found the following typo in Ch. 14:
He pushed off the stalactite and slowly paddled parallel the the floor of the pool, feeding out cable sparingly by using the reel’s adjustable drag.
Corrected it: parallel to the floor...
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